Note to Peers- Chosen Discourse Project

The main problem I am having is the ability to get my point across. I am unsure if I completely understand the prompt, so if you guys have any advice on whether I am going in the right direction or not that would be greatly appreciated. I feel like I made the point that the dentistry discourse being a dominant secondary discourse is clear. If not then please specify where I should make it more clear. I think I need more help on integrating the building task, if there is any opinions on how I can improve the flow of talking about the building task I would love to hear it. I don’t really know if I am actually introducing them correctly in the paper it is something I know I need to go back too. Also my last paragraph is struggling, I understand. I am honestly at a real lost with this assignment so any help would be greatly appreciated.

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time on task 20min