Subordinate:
“After he was able to learn how to manage his time, he finally got the grade he wanted”.
I am emphasizing on the fact that he did not get the grade he wanted until after he learned to manage his time effectively. The reason why is because before he did not want to put in the time to do anything. Everything to him took only half an hour at most, which clearly didn’t work out well. This sentence is complex for the reason that because it states two things how he got the changed and what the results were.
“Since shown in elementary education that there is a lack of effort shown by sponsors, it can result in a negative effect on a students education.”
In this sentence it sates an issue and its result which make it a complex sentence. I am trying to emphasize on the issue of lacking effort causes students education to have a negative effect. negative effect being the result of effort not being shown. The main issue is effort not being shown because very kid is different. so a teacher needs to know when to individualize a student to allow them to succeed.
“After Hibbard explains her teacher made a positive impact on her through being there for her one and one, not just teaching her the subjects.”
My main point here is that the teacher made the effort to support Paige. Something that not every teacher is willing to do. They can’t just focus on getting through the lesson plans and teaching the subjects they need. They also need to make sure the student understand what they are being taught. This sentence is complex because it states my independent claim and followed with a clause.
Coordinate:
“Larson explains that this discipline is a way of brainwashing the students into knowing the rules of writing which is helpful, but not in everyday life will you be able to use those rules.”
In this sentence I show that it is coordinate sentence by breaking the two sentences into putting the word but in between my thoughts. I am emphasizing both part equally because it is true students should not be brainwashed into all these rules that are helpful in the moment, but not long term.
“This strategy of planning helped him not only in his english class, but all other classes.”
This sentence is a complex sentence because its showing that planning can be effective in not only english but in other subjects as well. I am emphasizing on both part here that learning to be organized with have a positive effect in not just one way but many.
“In order for the student to show effort they need their trusted sponsor to show a sense of effort, so they can rely on constant help.”
This sentence has two point that I am emphasizing on. The points being that I am showing that in order for one to succeed they need to have someone they can trust so they know they can alway have help. Both points are important to show what a sponsors duties are to a student.
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